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The Knocking

October 29, 2010
Love came knocking at my door today…
unexpectedly
It’s gentle melodic wrapping on my
hearts center surprised me…
suddenly

I listened and heard your song
in the evening wind and I smiled…
automatically

I peeked through the window of my soul
and saw your eyes smiling out at me…
happily

Yesterday I might have shied away
and ran to hide…
fearfully

But today I opened the door of life to love
and with open arms received you…
lovingly

Monica Garcia Saenz © 2010

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7 Comments leave one →
  1. Glory permalink
    November 18, 2010 6:56 am

    beautiful

  2. November 19, 2010 1:02 am

    Love is like this, it only comes knocking when it sees a crack in the door — this is nice. A coming of age piece.

  3. November 20, 2010 2:45 am

    love this one.
    well done.

  4. November 20, 2010 7:23 am

    awesome 😀

  5. November 20, 2010 9:35 am

    I would love to have you in poets rally week 33.
    let me know by leaving a link under my post.
    Thanks a ton.
    You are quite productive.
    beautiful poem!

  6. November 20, 2010 7:37 pm

    Very nice

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