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The Voice

November 4, 2010
I listened to the voice of Spirit tonight
as it whispered to me in the evening wind
showering me with the wisdom of ages
enlightening me with the secrets of time

Its words rang with a powerful truth
that touched my very core
Its magical tune was delighting…
Its beautiful essence inviting…

Lifting my soul
Empowering my mind
strengthening my body
Feeding my hungry heart
with its endless love from the universe
and beyond…

I looked forward into my future
and it was your face I saw in the horizon
slowly and steadily coming towards me
wish ease
It was then that I knew for sure
it was safe to give you my heart
and wish for forever next to you

Today I lost myself in thoughts of you
and let myself fall into your wonderous space…
Today I gave you my love
and wrote your name on my heart
because Spirit told me to!

Monica Garcia Saenz © 2010

42 Comments leave one →
  1. November 4, 2010 11:21 pm

    sweet words.
    your imagery is always amazing.
    thanks for sharing.

  2. November 4, 2010 11:22 pm

    welcome in,
    scan the participant list, let me know after you are done 18 visiting…

    no limit of course. it is upon your own pleasure to explore.
    have fun!
    i am tickled by your lovely input.

    • November 4, 2010 11:43 pm

      I’m done with my 18… maybe I even did more…. Thanks for sharing all the links. I very much enjoyed all the poetry! Great job!

  3. November 5, 2010 12:07 am

    Love is in the eye of the beholder! But also in your heart, your poem, and Spirit! Very romantic. Great poem!

  4. November 5, 2010 12:11 am

    I like this.

  5. November 5, 2010 12:31 am

    Nice offering! This is some great work, very tender and open. I can see the passion in this writing and I feel very pleased reading it. Thanks for sharing with us!

  6. November 5, 2010 12:33 am

    When it seems so right and natural…It probably is! Isn’t that how it’s supposed to be? Peace be with you.

  7. November 5, 2010 1:43 am

    awwww…thats such a sweet and heartfelt poem you have there 🙂

  8. November 5, 2010 4:07 am

    This is wonderful. My first visit to your site. I do like your poem. Well done. Love does feel inspired, doesn’t it? What a stricking photograph as well. Nice work.

    Happy Rally. Poem on …

  9. November 5, 2010 11:06 am

    This is a such a beautiful piece of poetry. Love and the soul go hand and hand. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading it.

  10. Jessicas Japes permalink
    November 5, 2010 11:56 am

    This is beautiful! I love the emotion you have put into it, and the importance of the Spirit’s decision. A cute read!

  11. November 5, 2010 1:26 pm

    a beautiful rendering.. 🙂 filled with passion… and emotions!

    many thanks for visiting me!

  12. Mase Da Rula permalink
    November 5, 2010 8:23 pm

    loved the imagery in this piece….. you have a way with words that I like

    .Mase Da Rula.
    A Ruler’s Kingdom

  13. November 6, 2010 6:03 am

    Hi Monica, very good poem! All about a strong love! 🙂

  14. November 6, 2010 6:46 am

    I hope I find my spirit soon. 🙂 Nice work dear.

  15. November 6, 2010 2:08 pm

    This is so very beautiful…..
    I love it sooo much… 🙂

  16. November 6, 2010 3:23 pm

    Spirited to love… enjoyed your verse… its beautiful. Love your last few lines…

    Feeding my hungry heart
    with its endless love from the universe
    and beyond…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay

  17. November 6, 2010 6:16 pm

    Spirit is an inspirational thing indeed…enjoy how you display your thoughts…nicely done.

  18. actober permalink
    November 6, 2010 6:46 pm

    “I look forward into my future…” gosh, my life. much appreciated.

  19. November 9, 2010 1:28 pm

    letting you know Rally poetry awards posted, hope that you check it out,

    link a poem to Jingle poetry potluck if you can,
    i value your support.

    hope you well…

  20. Morning permalink
    November 10, 2010 1:08 pm

    award notice,
    Happy Wednesday!
    Link a poem to Jingle Poetry potluck if you can, I value your support!

  21. November 12, 2010 4:35 pm

    I’m often saddened at the thought of those who never hear the voice – the look of incomprehension that can fill their eyes when trying to discuss it. So the pleasant feelings your words evoked in me were greatly amplified by the subject and expression of how you hear it.
    A lovely poem.

    my rally:

  22. Neesha permalink
    November 20, 2010 8:01 pm

    “I gently pulled you out from that secret holding place” – wonderful line!!! (Madame S.Fox)


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