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My Musical Wish – Perfect Poet

November 20, 2010

Thursday Poets Rally Week 33 Poem Post-Perfect Poet Award Acceptance


My Musical Wish

I wish I was musically gifted
I wish I could gracefully play
the piano with ease…

I wish my fingers
knew the notes of love
on those shiny black and white keys…

If I could
I would definitely play you a melody
of soft gentle sweetness
and never-ending beautiful love

I would write you a poetic song
that would slowly wrap your heart
in its sensual melodic notes
and whisper promises of
unconditional love in every tune

I would touch your heart
with my sultry song
I would move your soul
with my magical music

Oh If I was so lucky as to
be blessed with musical gifts
my love song would surely be for you!

Monica Garcia Saenz © 2010


This post is for Thursday Poets Rally Week 33 Poem Post.


I would like to nominate This Space Taken by ljm

13 Comments leave one →
  1. November 21, 2010 2:50 am

    very lovely wishes,
    well deserved award.

    if you could nominate a poet you like for week 34,
    then all is complete….
    Happy Sunday!

  2. November 21, 2010 11:30 am

    Oh I know this feelings, and so wanted to learn how to play those black and white keys … but you are young and you seem to have a head start on a beautiful song …. after all, the key board has black and white, and you played it well here.

    Thank you for your precious nomination. I am so honored.

  3. November 21, 2010 11:39 am

    Glad that you make it perfect.
    Thanks for the support and contribution…

    if possible, get ready to participate at Jingle poetry potluck…

    we are open from American central time 8pm, link in any poem,
    do it early so that you get best possible feedback…

  4. November 21, 2010 12:05 pm

    a very sweet piece with lovely illustration; thanks for sharing this.

  5. November 21, 2010 5:09 pm

    Beautiful love song you’ve penned here.

  6. November 22, 2010 10:04 am

    Lovely thoughts well expressed. I do hope you are able to touch the heart of this fortunate soul with sultry melodies.


  7. November 22, 2010 11:55 am

    such a beautiful poem….and if you could play, I would surely listen 🙂

  8. November 23, 2010 4:42 pm

    This poem has done exactly what you wished for…created music! Lovely…

  9. November 24, 2010 7:26 am

    Beautifully written poetry, with excellent flow. 🙂

  10. November 25, 2010 3:58 pm

    This is excellent.
    Nice thing to write a poem about

  11. December 13, 2010 3:46 pm

    With words as beautiful as these, you don’t need to play a love tune to charm them… this is just perfect, and so soooo romantic!

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