The Voice
November 4, 2010
I listened to the voice of Spirit tonightas it whispered to me in the evening wind
showering me with the wisdom of ages
enlightening me with the secrets of time
Its words rang with a powerful truth
that touched my very core
Its magical tune was delighting…
Its beautiful essence inviting…
Lifting my soul
Empowering my mind
strengthening my body
Feeding my hungry heart
with its endless love from the universe
and beyond…
I looked forward into my future
and it was your face I saw in the horizon
slowly and steadily coming towards me
wish ease
It was then that I knew for sure
it was safe to give you my heart
and wish for forever next to you
Today I lost myself in thoughts of you
and let myself fall into your wonderous space…
Today I gave you my love
and wrote your name on my heart
because Spirit told me to!
Monica Garcia Saenz © 2010
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Expressions of the Self 
sweet words.
your imagery is always amazing.
thanks for sharing.
Thanks Jingle! I’m loving all the traffic to my blog! You are the BEST!
welcome in,
scan the participant list, let me know after you are done 18 visiting…
no limit of course. it is upon your own pleasure to explore.
have fun!
i am tickled by your lovely input.
xxx
I’m done with my 18… maybe I even did more…. Thanks for sharing all the links. I very much enjoyed all the poetry! Great job!
Love is in the eye of the beholder! But also in your heart, your poem, and Spirit! Very romantic. Great poem!
Thanks Dan! I appreciate it!
I like this.
🙂 Thanks Morganna!
Nice offering! This is some great work, very tender and open. I can see the passion in this writing and I feel very pleased reading it. Thanks for sharing with us!
Thank you! I do write from the heart and I am a very passionate person!
When it seems so right and natural…It probably is! Isn’t that how it’s supposed to be? Peace be with you.
Thank you again! I so appreciate the nice words!
awwww…thats such a sweet and heartfelt poem you have there 🙂
🙂 Gracias!
This is wonderful. My first visit to your site. I do like your poem. Well done. Love does feel inspired, doesn’t it? What a stricking photograph as well. Nice work.
Happy Rally. Poem on …
Thank you for visiting and for taking the time to comment! I’m loving the poetry rally!
This is a such a beautiful piece of poetry. Love and the soul go hand and hand. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading it.
I very much appreciate all the kind words – you inspire me to continue sharing my work!
This is beautiful! I love the emotion you have put into it, and the importance of the Spirit’s decision. A cute read!
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/10/29/i-want-chocolate/
Thank you Jessica!
a beautiful rendering.. 🙂 filled with passion… and emotions!
many thanks for visiting me!
Leo,
Likewise! I appreciate the visit and the nice comments!
loved the imagery in this piece….. you have a way with words that I like
.Mase Da Rula.
A Ruler’s Kingdom
http://dieselfromthad.wordpress.com
Thanks! 🙂
Hi Monica, very good poem! All about a strong love! 🙂
Ina, Thanks for the visit! 🙂
I hope I find my spirit soon. 🙂 Nice work dear.
Thanks Vinay! Spirit will find you soon I am sure!
This is so very beautiful…..
I love it sooo much… 🙂
Thanks for the visit and the sweet comments!
Spirited to love… enjoyed your verse… its beautiful. Love your last few lines…
Feeding my hungry heart
with its endless love from the universe
and beyond…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Spirit is an inspirational thing indeed…enjoy how you display your thoughts…nicely done.
“I look forward into my future…” gosh, my life. much appreciated.
Actober – thanks for the visit! 🙂
letting you know Rally poetry awards posted, hope that you check it out,
link a poem to Jingle poetry potluck if you can,
i value your support.
xx
hope you well…
award notice,
Happy Wednesday!
Link a poem to Jingle Poetry potluck if you can, I value your support!
xxx
I’m often saddened at the thought of those who never hear the voice – the look of incomprehension that can fill their eyes when trying to discuss it. So the pleasant feelings your words evoked in me were greatly amplified by the subject and expression of how you hear it.
A lovely poem.
my rally:
“I gently pulled you out from that secret holding place” – wonderful line!!! (Madame S.Fox)